Please response this topic GOOD ! :)

[D&G. 2]

Hello, I have done a lot work to this and I would ask some nice people to look at it and correct my sentence if they are wrong or if I'm wrong or if you have more because this is a projekt I'm doing at the school....

Thanks to the people who will be a nice buddy and do this...

In 1066 did England get conquered by Normans. They soon began o conquer land in Wales and Scotland. In 1168 did the king of Leinster need help in a rebellion with other Irish kings. He applied association with the Normans. This gave them “good ideasâ€. The Normish leaders as Richard Fitzgilbert de Clare did soon start a rebellion land in Ireland. The pope in Rome was Europe’s most powerful man in the Middle Ages. He gave the English king Henry the second over-command over the island. But the Normans melted fast together with Irish population. In the end of the Middle Ages controlled the English kings only a little spot around Dublin called “the Paleâ€. In the rest of Ireland did they continue as they have lived so far. In the year of 1500 broke England with the Roman-Catholic church, England became protestant. The English kings and queens were keen to win land and they began a serie of bloody wars against the catholic Irish. Even in the period, when England didn’t have any king did the attacks continue. When the Irish in 1649 had a rebellion in the city Drogheda took the English leader Oliver Cromwell a cruel revenge he let the city’s people get slaughtered. The Catholics land wasn’t there’s anymore and were given to protestant immigrants from England and Scotland. In 1685 did England and Scotland get a new king named James the second. In Scotland was he James the seventh. Soon did he loose the crown to a Dutch protestant William of Orange. The Irish stood up to support King James but he got beaten by William in 1690 in the battle at Boyne. King Williams’s victory is still celebrated by Protestants in Northern Ireland. In 1798 did Ireland get permission to found there own parliament. But that was over after a rebellion in 1798: The united Irish that consist of both protestant and Catholics made a rebellion under leadership by Theobald Wolfe Tone. They got supported by French revolutions-soldiers but even so did the English break the rebellion down. The Irish parliament got abolished and in the year of 1800 was the island made to a part of the United Kingdom. The Irish Catholics got there rights to vote taken from them, they did first get it back in 1829. There leader was the great people-leader Daniel O’Connell. They also mad nationalist groups as the Young Ireland Party. The United Kingdom did in 1914 agree to give Ireland home-control so they had there own government. In 1918 did the world was one stop. The Irish republic army now began a rebellion in many parts of the country. This led to that the British in 1920 sent special-forces to Ireland to break the rebellion. In 1922 did the British finally allowed the foundation of the Irish free-government. The island should now have limited self-control except for the six counties in Ulster. In 1927 did Éamon de Valera become the president and started immediately to break the strings to the United Kingdom. There was peace to the end of the 1960’s. In Ulster did the Catholics complain about the got threaten with no respect. In 1969 did they organize big protest marches. This developed into violent collisions and the British sent soldiers to the province. IRA resumed the fight but declared truce in 1972. The fight did however get resumed by new army-similar organizations as Provisional IRA and the British national liberation army. In 1994 declared the different organizations truce and began negotiations with the British government. But in February 1996 broke IRA the truce.

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<div class='quotetop'>QUOTE (ÄÂ&Äž @ May 29 2007, 04:35 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}></div>

In 1066 did England get conquered by Normans.

That sounds like your asking a question.

[Guest giographick]

i'm not even going to attempt this if you're not going to proofread the first sentence.

[D&amp;G. 2]

What shall I put in then ????And please make the things that is wrong right...

[D&amp;G. 2]

Try to look at it now... It should be better now..

In 1066 England got conquered by Normans. They soon began to conquer land in Wales and Scotland. In 1168, the king of Leinster need help in a rebellion with other Irish kings. He applied association with the Normans. This gave them “good ideasâ€. The Normish leaders as Richard Fitzgilbert de Clare did soon start a rebellion land in Ireland. The pope in Rome was Europe’s most powerful man in the Middle Ages. He gave the English king Henry the second over-command over the island. But the Normans melted fast together with Irish population. In the end of the Middle Ages controlled the English kings only a little spot around Dublin called “the Paleâ€. In the rest of Ireland they did continue as they have lived so far. In the year of 1500 broke England with the Roman-Catholic church, England became protestant. The English kings and queens were keen to win land and they began a serie of bloody wars against the catholic Irish. Even in the period, when England didn’t have any king did the attacks continue. When the Irish in 1649 had a rebellion in the city Drogheda took the English leader Oliver Cromwell a cruel revenge he let the city’s people get slaughtered. The Catholics land wasn’t there’s anymore and were given to protestant immigrants from England and Scotland. In 1685 did England and Scotland get a new king named James the second. In Scotland was he James the seventh. Soon did he loose the crown to a Dutch protestant William of Orange. The Irish stood up to support King James but he got beaten by William in 1690 in the battle at Boyne. King Williams’s victory is still celebrated by Protestants in Northern Ireland. In 1798 did Ireland get permission to found there own parliament. But that was over after a rebellion in 1798: The united Irish that consist of both protestant and Catholics made a rebellion under leadership by Theobald Wolfe Tone. They got supported by French revolutions-soldiers but even so did the English break the rebellion down. The Irish parliament got abolished and in the year of 1800 was the island made to a part of the United Kingdom. The Irish Catholics got there rights to vote taken from them, they did first get it back in 1829. There leader was the great people-leader Daniel O’Connell. They also mad nationalist groups as the Young Ireland Party. The United Kingdom did in 1914 agree to give Ireland home-control so they had there own government. In 1918 did the world was one stop. The Irish republic army now began a rebellion in many parts of the country. This led to that the British in 1920 sent special-forces to Ireland to break the rebellion. In 1922 did the British finally allowed the foundation of the Irish free-government. The island should now have limited self-control except for the six counties in Ulster. In 1927 did Éamon de Valera become the president and started immediately to break the strings to the United Kingdom. There was peace to the end of the 1960’s. In Ulster did the Catholics complain about the got threaten with no respect. In 1969 did they organize big protest marches. This developed into violent collisions and the British sent soldiers to the province. IRA resumed the fight but declared truce in 1972. The fight did however get resumed by new army-similar organizations as Provisional IRA and the British national liberation army. In 1994 declared the different organizations truce and began negotiations with the British government. But in February 1996 IRA broke the truce.

[Guest giographick]

richard fitzgilbert de clare was anglo-norman not "normish".

you're having problems getting the correct tense on lots of your words. what grade are you in?

[D&amp;G. 2]

<div class='quotetop'>QUOTE (giographick @ May 29 2007, 06:28 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}></div>

richard fitzgilbert de clare was anglo-norman not "normish".

you're having problems getting the correct tense on lots of your words. what grade are you in?

9'th but I'm from Denmark... Could you do me a big favour and make it good ? like all the right sentese ???

[D&amp;G. 2]

<div class='quotetop'>QUOTE (giographick @ May 29 2007, 06:28 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}></div>

richard fitzgilbert de clare was anglo-norman not "normish".

I know i just wrote he was there leader.. because he was

[Guest Shephard]

In 1066, England was conquered by Normans. They soon began to conquer land in Wales and Scotland. In 1168, the king of Leinster needed help in a rebellion with other Irish kings. He applied association with the Normans. This gave them “good ideasâ€. The Normand leaders as Richard Fitzgilbert de Clare soon start a rebellion land in Ireland. The pope in Rome was Europe’s most powerful man in the Middle Ages. He gave the English king Henry the second over-command over the island. But the Normans melted fast together with Irish population. In the end of the Middle Ages controlled the English kings only a little spot around Dublin called “the Paleâ€. In the rest of Ireland they continued as they have lived so far. In the year of 1500 England broke off the Roman-Catholic church, England became protestant. The English kings and queens were keen to win land and they began a series of bloody wars against the catholic Irish. Even in the period, when England didn’t have any king the attacks continue. When the Irish had a rebellion in 1649 the city Drogheda took the English leader Oliver Cromwell a cruel revenge he let the city’s people get slaughtered. The Catholics land wasn’t there’s anymore and were given to protestant immigrants from England and Scotland. In 1685 England and Scotland got a new king named James the second. In Scotland he was James the seventh. Soon he lost the crown to a Dutch protestant William of Orange. The Irish stood up to support King James but he got beaten by William in 1690 in the battle at Boyne. King Williams’s victory is still celebrated by Protestants in Northern Ireland. In 1798 Ireland got permission to found there own parliament. But that was over after a rebellion in 1798: The united Irish that consist of both protestant and Catholics made a rebellion under leadership by Theobald Wolfe Tone. They got supported by French revolutions-soldiers but even so did the English break the rebellion down. The Irish parliament got abolished and in the year of 1800 was the island made to a part of the United Kingdom. The Irish Catholics got there rights to vote taken from them, they did first get it back in 1829. There leader was the great people-leader Daniel O’Connell. They also made nationalist groups as the Young Ireland Party. The United Kingdom in 1914 agreed to give Ireland home-control so they had there own government. In 1918 the world was one stop. The Irish republic army now began a rebellion in many parts of the country. This led to that the British in 1920 sent special-forces to Ireland to break the rebellion. In 1922 did the British finally allowed the foundation of the Irish free-government. The island should now have limited self-control except for the six counties in Ulster. In 1927 did Éamon de Valera become the president and started immediately to break the strings to the United Kingdom. There was peace until the end of the 1960’s. In Ulster the Catholics complained about the lack of respect. In 1969 they organized big protest marches. This developed into violent collisions and the British sent soldiers to the province. IRA resumed the fight but declared truce in 1972. The fight was however resumed by new army-similar organizations as Provisional IRA and the British national liberation army. In 1994 declared the different organizations truce and began negotiations with the British government. But in February 1996 broke IRA the truce.

there ya go D&G all done

[Plunkizzle 0]

lol dam shephard just fucking fix your entire project

[D&amp;G. 2]

I know i asked him to do it because i know he's the one and only...

[Guest Shephard]

it was my pleasure, and if anyone else needs help, feel free to ask.

[D&amp;G. 2]

<div class='quotetop'>QUOTE (Shephard @ May 29 2007, 07:51 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}></div>

it was my pleasure, and if anyone else needs help, feel free to ask.

I need help but i don't think you want to help with that mate

[Guest Shephard]

lol

[D&amp;G. 2]

<div class='quotetop'>QUOTE (Shephard @ May 29 2007, 08:34 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}></div>

lol

hehe