Madbagel 12 Posted June 12, 2011 I found this piece of gold while browsing Facepunch. (link to thread here)The year is 2246 and due to scientists' experiments gone awry, create a super organism spanning most of the Earth. The organism is made of any living things and feeds off itself, perpetually producing more organisms within itself to eat.On the moon, scientists and religious extremists are fighting a civil war. The scientists want to destroy the organism, and the religious extremists want to let the creature live as they value all life.Link: http://hillridge.net/SA/Bio%20Apocalypse.pdfSeriously though it's an amazing read, and actually has a very deep moral behind it as well. There's some powerful shit in it (The commandments is what got me). Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Zachmanman 877 Posted June 12, 2011 the ending was kinda gay Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Madbagel 12 Posted June 12, 2011 the ending was kinda gayI wasn't expecting it either but hey it was written by a 6th grader. I loved the 2 commandments though. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Sketchmaticx 3170 Posted June 12, 2011 I lol'd at the part about Africa. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Robert Timecock 19 Posted June 12, 2011 That's pretty awesome, but that kid needs some therapy maybe. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Anonymous 47 Posted June 12, 2011 This story is better the twilight, harry potter, & whatever books out there. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
hairynipon 20 Posted June 12, 2011 This story is better the twilight, harry potter, & whatever books out there.Dude twilight and harry potter are complete representation of all books that exist, you didn't need to tack on that last bit there. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Todden.Puffer 0 Posted June 12, 2011 For a sixth grader that is incredibly good.Hell i couldn't draw that good now but i always sucked at drawing. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kelso 4 Posted June 12, 2011 You know this kid just had such a fucking time making this.e=Mc2 poster in science labRATATAT gun soundsThere I was sold, but then the sweet joke about Africa... Yeah the author of this is cool.But only if it's a kid.edit: man what the fuck? this guy uses some big concepts and words for an 11th grader. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
RockbeatsPaper 190 Posted June 12, 2011 very creative, but the continuing references to agony and pain leads me to believe this is one fucked up kid. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
drunkula 1635 Posted June 12, 2011 i loled. also rofl @ immaculate abortion Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Renegade 1198 Posted June 12, 2011 I lol'd at the part about Africa.Giant butt over Africa....LOL Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Madbagel 12 Posted June 12, 2011 i loled. also rofl @ immaculate abortionI swear to god he got the immaculate abortion from that band name generator. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Sandvich 0 Posted June 12, 2011 Wow. That was a crazy story. 1. what happened to that old man? ideas? and who thought the half-human stuff showed a dark side of teh writer? Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kelso 4 Posted June 12, 2011 Wow. That was a crazy story. 1. what happened to that old man? ideas? and who thought the half-human stuff showed a dark side of teh writer?It wasn't THAT dark.As for the old man I'm pretty sure this kid just wanted to make a cool old man fighting a monster that ate humanity with a cane. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Oreo 2073 Posted June 12, 2011 They died in each others arms after having sex.....oh god lol. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Martyr Shu 0 Posted June 12, 2011 That was beautiful. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Sandvich 0 Posted June 12, 2011 ... Beautiful is not the way i'd put it Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites