ba_sg_jrrrbs

[bulletford 1134]

I've been working on a jailbreak map for a week now, It's my first map(Mapping for css is actually pretty fun )

The armory:

http://img401.imageshack.us/i/basgjrrrbs50001.jpg/

Above Infirmary:

http://img267.imageshack.us/i/basgjrrrbs50002.jpg/

Front of infirmary:

http://img585.imageshack.us/i/basgjrrrbs50003.jpg/

Top of cells:

http://img135.imageshack.us/i/basgjrrrbs50004.jpg/

Front of cells:

http://img510.imageshack.us/i/basgjrrrbs50005.jpg/

Inside cells:

http://img266.imageshack.us/i/basgjrrrbs50007.jpg/

Box Cage:

http://img341.imageshack.us/i/basgjrrrbs50008.jpg/

Pool(Too small?):

http://img137.imageshack.us/i/basgjrrrbs50009.jpg/

Shower with toilet stalls:

http://img687.imageshack.us/i/basgjrrrbs50010.jpg/

Defend the house(tried to make it a guard house):

http://img267.imageshack.us/i/basgjrrrbs50016.jpg/

Defend the house armory:

http://img35.imageshack.us/i/basgjrrrbs50011.jpg/

Defend the house has a kitchen:

http://img717.imageshack.us/i/basgjrrrbs50012.jpg/

Defend the house bathroom:

http://img148.imageshack.us/i/basgjrrrbs50013.jpg/

Useless table in dth(Should have seats, set it to prop_physics, gotta fix it)

http://img9.imageshack.us/i/basgjrrrbs50014.jpg/

Lounge room in dth(terrorist can climb down chimney Lol)

http://img594.imageshack.us/i/basgjrrrbs50015.jpg/

I'm a city around the prison, for war-days(This is the start of it, not finished yet):

http://img262.imageshack.us/i/basgjrrrbs50017.jpg/

http://img560.imageshack.us/i/basgjrrrbs50022.jpg/

Give some input, I want other mappers input(It looks bad imo).

Can anyone help out with a soccor goal?, Don't know how to make a correct trigger to reset the ball.

EDIT: wrong section can it get moved to projects?

[thorgot 2420]

Looks really generic. And I'm not talking about the textures or anything, which I'm sure you know need work. I mean that from what I can tell, it would be really hard to describe your map without describing a better one at the same time.

What do you want to stand out about your map? What is going to make people vote for it?

It is a good start for a first-time mapper, but do some thinking about what you want to be in your map and how it is going to be laid out.